đ„ Community Tagline Roast - Let's fix some taglines
Think your productâs one-liner is good? Letâs find out.
Post your product and your tagline below and get real feedback from fellow makersâdoes it land, confuse, or completely miss?
Use this format when giving feedback to others:
First thoughts: What do you think the product is?
(1-5) How likely are you to try it based on the tagline alone? Why or why not? 5 = extremely likely, 1 = not interested.
How clear is it? (do you feel you understand what the product does and what problem it's solving?)
How can it be improved?
Drop yours. Roast your fellow makers. Letâs make our taglines better đ
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I Give Cool GIfts
https://www.producthunt.com/p/i-give-cool-gifts/i-give-cool-gifts-2
I Give Cool Gifts: The ultimate destination for gift-giving inspiration
igivecoolgifts.com
@blake_band
> First thoughts: What do you think the product is?
I'm guessing a directory / website with various gift ideas on it, maybe searchable or organized by categories
> (1-5) How likely are you to try it based on the tagline alone? Why or why not?
probably 2 -- it's actually a service I'm interested in in general, but the tagline doesn't pull me in -- why is this the ultimate destination for gift-giving? Feels like a hollow claim right now
> How clear is it? (do you feel you understand what the product does and what problem it's solving?)
Ha -- that depends if I'm right about what it is / does! But yeah seems relatively clear in theory.
> How can it be improved?
I guess I just want to know what makes these gift recommendations trustworthy and valuable. "Impartial gift recs with no affiliate fees," "gift recs sourced from over 1 million reddit comments," "hand-curated gifts with no drop-shipping allowed", whatever your special source is that explains why users should trust your recs over others -- basically you're competing with me googling "gift recommendations for [12 year olds who like bicycles]," and while that's a low bar to clear I need a reason before I'll trust a new website to fill that niche
@blake_band
Clarity: yes it's clear
Would I use it: no, I'm not a gifter
How can it be improved: what about something unique/compelling to make this more than just gift inspo
minimalist phone: creating folders
If possible, explain also what you expect (expected behaviour) from the product. This taught me one developer from an Android app company, and it immensely helped them to improve the app. (Because I was specific and outlined what I want as potential customer.)
@ifeanyi_sa I get what is is and I like the idea and would use it if I wasn't allergic to all the js frameworks. Nice work!
How does it make money?
We know we are not the best at promoting the technique so any comments and criticisms are welcome:
https://www.producthunt.com/products/void-zero-knowledge-proof-nocby/
@omer_faruk_bulut2 can you post the product and the tagline here?
@uri_bram1 Ahh sorry, my bad.
The "black" images found on zeroknowledgeproof.net are images that have data stored in them by our VOID algorithm, in other words, the product is actually a data storage technique and those images are the product that emerges as a result of the technique.
"They can't hack, if they can't see"
@omer_faruk_bulut2 for sure!
So I'm not entirely clear, to be honest -- the name ZeroKnowledgeProof makes me think/assume it's some kind of cryptography product involving zero knowledge proofs! The tagline doesn't convey much more to me.
1 -- I'm probably not the audience for this though, assume it's some kind of b2b product with a specific target audience in mind? (I'm not going to check the website yet because I feel like that violates the spirit of the game here!)
Not clear to me at least!
I think just knowing who the customer is for this / what you're trying to "sell" would be super helpful, then I could have clearer ideas of a tagline that would convey the right idea / appeal to the right audience. Seems like a product that will be hard to fully explain in a short tagline, but the tagline could at least be a good batsignal to appeal to the kind of customer the product is designed for.
@uri_bram1 Hey Uri, thanks for sharing your thoughts! We'll definitely take your words into consideration for future promotions/launches.
Hey @steveb and fellow makers How about this one? CreatorCube AI â All your AI tools in one intuitive cube. Would appreciate your feedback for our upcoming launch. Thanks
https://www.producthunt.com/posts/creatorcube-ai
@larrystefanjr
Clarity: Not sure what all of my AI tools are. I instantly think about a lot of chrome extensions that launch that duplicate ChatGPT functionality or insist I need to summarize youtube videos all of the time
Would I use it: Based on the above, no
Now I looked at the launch and the website and I think the above holds pretty true. What can I do with this that I can't do in ChatGPT/Claude? Is the bet that you can tie in 3rd party services like Eleven Labs and then charge a premium on tokens?
At a tagline level "the platform built for the rest of us" feels odd as I don't know how to answer the above questions and the tagline doesn't speak to any of that. Am I missing something very easy? Sorry if so!